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Top Five Travel Destinations in Fall This article was about the five best places to travel in the fall. The reason this article captured my attention was to catchy entry line. I believe it is effective because it becomes personal when he is talking about his own personal life so it makes the readers feel like they are not just reading from the computer. It also makes you wonder what his reasoning is behind it especially if you are a traveler. The only way they could improve would be to make the introduction shorter because people with extremely low attention spans may not get to the second line to be captured. This article is dedicated towards travels and focuses on five places around the world; Ottawa (Canada), Aix-en-Provence (France), Zion National Park (Utah), Kyoto (Japan), and Buenos Aires (Argentina). His focus is to advise travelers to go during the fall because he believes that during that time, is when it is at its finest and will create the best experience. Adam Bisby says...
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